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8th Meetings, "Expository"











TEENS SMOKE CIGARETTES



 

Many people have know  what is cigarettes, and what the problem from smoking. The cigarettes usually used by adult people such as father, grand father, uncle, etc. not seldom also the women  smoke.  But in this era smoking not only used by adult people, but also teens have smoking eventhought they ages not enought to mentioned of adult, and their  identity also still as students in junior or senior high school. They are smoking cigarettes because they maybe embitered with what is cigarettes, and what is the cigarettes taste, so the teens feel embitered. the teens try to smoking and finally the teens intoxicating like a drug.
Many factors to get a reason about why teens smoke cigarettes, like social intercourse or association problems that not good, area or surroundings factors, not too much get attention from parents and family, soul condition that is not good like depresion, give up, oppresed and lower education also be one of the hard factor. Actually one of the factors could we take a reasons teens smoke cigarettes. Certainly one of the hard reasons or the hard factors are lower attention from parents, because family surrounding and parents attention it’s all most hard effect from a child. So “insyallah” if the parents to educate them son or daughter with manner or good attention, so “insyallah” them son or daughter will grow and be good child that haven’t minus moral.
Actually, cigarettes is not good to used because cigarettes can be disturb their pregnant. It's danger or jeopardy essence to human body or in our healty, at least there are 2 dangers essence into a cigarettes that most danger, such as nicotine and tar. Actually all the people start from teens till adult people know the effect from smoke cigarettes. But in a fact all the people aspecialy for men still smoke cigarettes, although in no smoking area or in the beside of children.
Based on Jakarta news paper, 40% from cigarettes user is teens, and 60% is adult people, whereas many sacrifice from smoke cigarettes that not seldom the sacrifice till pass away. In front of the cigarettes box, in the street banner affixed on both ends, have there are a announcedment about the danger from smoke cigarettes like nuisance of embryo, nuisance of soul, impotention, attack of heart, attack of pregnant etc.
Necessary to know, actually prohibition to no smoking have gives by the governor and cigarettes enterprise self, but the people just consider that’s all like just a advertisement. But from other factors, that can be a directive is decipline, and than the decipline can we got from an education because good education can gives learning, examples, and good decipline too. And about healty, still keep your healt, and dont underestimate about healty because not only your money that maybe could lose, but also your soul. Cigarettes just a stalk of diseases that cant gives you the benefit, but start to choose education that can gives you more benefit than your life before and bring you to be the success person.

7th Meetings (Descriptive)


 
 A Person You Admire

 
 
ORLANDO BLOOM


Orlando Bloom is an ideal man. He is very handsome, he is one of good actor in Hollywood, and he also a top model  from one of international brands.  He has white skin, he has tall body,  and he has different eyes colour from us, he has brown eyes, as you loot at her eyes, you may feel like look at a brown saphire. Her body is slim like Hollywood actor Johnny Deep. He has little curly hair and he also has sweet smile that makes everyone feel a sense of enchantment.
 from a lot of characters, that make i admire with him is about his action and acting in every film, he is very total when Bloom is becoming other character, such as a character of William Tuner in The Pirates of the Caribbean, a character of Jack in Troy,  Zanreman in The Three Musketers  and Liam in the Kingdom of Heaven. But from many characters that Bloom has done, I  like Bloom more becoming  a character of Legolas in The Lord of The Rings Trilogy or The Hobbit film. By his long white hair that always hang loosely, his elf ears and a magic bow and arrow.
I admire with Bloom is not only to his handsome face, but also his good action. He has extremely great action and always makes his fans or people that watch his film will not feel regret in  watching his film. I like someone seems Bloom who always feel serious when do something. He shows if he never surrenders, never gives up. And It is prrofed by his film which always gets nomination at box office cinema, and gets many trophys from Oscar.
Orlando Bloom or called by Mr.Bloom is not from rich family, music or actor family, but he is ordinary man. In fact, He can be a Hollywood actor, and it is not easy problem for him.He must be hard worker to be famous actor, and as the result ,his effort and his hardwork has created a succesful right now.




 343 Words

Meeting 6





I WOULD  TO CHANGE

Maybe i always looks smiled, i always have fun, and made a also smiled. But, behind thats all i have something who make me destroy until right now. I always tried to liberated and free, but its all more harded from what you thought. This something not seldom made me shy,afraid, disappointed, and felt if alone is better for me.  I am brave, I am strong its all because Allah S.W.T.
I have destroyed not because other people, but because my self.  Very difficult and harded to me to may told my problem in time to other people. Maybe all of them knew something who made me destroyed, something who made me buried, but all of them not aware, and don’t knew about it. If i could go back in time, i would changed my world and i replaced everything. I like failed be my self, because this destroyed i difficult got something who i want. I felt defergent, not often i like jealous, jealous with someone world. Its all not about wealth, not about skill, ability, face etc. But its all about soul. I would to be frozen on the twitch, i would to be dumb on the words. With i can handle thats all, i also can to handle my world.
There is a place that bed or dilapidated, but that place made me better. And i also knew if my destroyed come from my self. I very foccus with my future, i received if my world in time are bed, but not i received this bed entered in my future. Its all made me aware if free in everything should had limit, and that limited that gave we an protection. And Allah SWT, is the place to we ask, ikhtiar and tawaqal. The time couldn’t go back in time, and thats all a mark if i should change right now before my future come,

5 Meetings






Description Of Narrative Writing
When you are asked to write a story, you are doing what is called "Narrative Writing." Narrative writing is meant to entertain! Part of being human is getting to tell great stories! 
Often, the word narrative is synonymous with story.  A narrative is the story (fiction or non-fiction) told and the order in which it is told.   Sometimes, there is a narrator, a character or series of characters, who tell the story. Sometimes, as with most non-fiction,  the author himself/herself in the narrator.  Narrative writing is very important in your day-to-day life.  For the rest of your life,you will write texts, e-mails, cover letters, blogs, etc. about  your beliefs,  your ambitions, information you know, and feelings you have.  What could be more important? 
Narrative writing in fiction and non-fiction (and even poetry) tells others the stories of our personal experiences and allows us to gain empathy and sympathy about the world around us.

How To Differ From Other Writing Genres.
            The difference between Narrative with other genre or non-narrative is the two types of text is the organization. Narrative text unfolds as a story. In many stories, events are told out of order (for example, through flashbacks), but underneath the surface there is a plot in which events are tied together chronologically. In non-narrative texts, the structure might not be chronological. Instead, it can be organized in a number of ways, such as:
  • cause and effect
  • main idea and supporting details
  • alphabetical order; e.g., dictionary or encyclopedia.
            The second major difference is that narratives have at least one lead character who has thoughts, feelings and experiences and who is intended to engage the reader.
            Narrative and non-narrative texts create very different reading experiences. Many theorists and researchers believe that narrative is the form of communication that comes to us most naturally: when we share our experiences with others, we usually do so as a narrative. As well, most of us will have heard or watched many narratives before we learn to read them on our own. The reader’s involvement with the character(s) also makes the experience of reading a narrative more personal. Some people find it harder to get engaged with non-narrative text because it lacks this human involvement. Others enjoy reading for facts and information rather than for feelings and experiences.

THE STEPS HOW TO MAKE A NARRATIVE WRITING
For make a narrative writing, you should  consist of the following structure:
v  Orientation
Introduction the participants and informing the time, place and the introduce some character.
EX : An Unforgettable experience in my live is about teaching practice for a competition or when the writer be the candidate for to be a  laboratourium language institute assistances on Muhammadiyah University of Metro on february 2th, 2014.  Maybe it’s all more for a failure experience, but there is a purpose behind this all that nobody know. At least within two months there are an failure that writer was forget, the 1st about grade score and the 2nd about assistance, but the writer not in buried condition or break a promise because the writer know and trush if Allah S.W.T knows what better for us.
v  Complication
Describing the rising crises that the participants have to do with or among participants relationship.
EX : This is a hard chalenge for the writer actually,but the writer mush practice to can be or accepted in laboratourium language institute as one of the assistance. The writer think if 15 minutes is the long time for a practice that doing in front of other assistance with a teaching technique, but all the chalenges have finished.
v  Resolution
Showing the way of participant to solve the crises, better or worse.
EX : Good or not the result the writer can accepted with humble because the writter trush if Allah S.W.T, knows and always gives what the better to Prophed Muhammad followers. And the writter said alhamdulillah to Allah S.W.T because ever doing teaching practice infront of other people for 15 minutes. The writer was third semesters, and trush if one day what’s the amazing day can we got from Allah S.W.T.
v  Coda
Summarizes the point of the story and moral message we may get.
EX : Good or not the result the writer can accepted with humble because the writter trush if Allah S.W.T, knows and always gives what the better to Prophed Muhammad followers.


EXAMPLE

MY EXPERIENCES
An Unforgettable experience in my live is about teaching practice for a competition or when I be the candidate for to be a  laboratourium language institute assistances on Muhammadiyah University of Metro on february 2th, 2014.  Maybe it’s all more for a failure experience, but there is a purpose behind this all that nobody know. At least within two months there are an failure I was forget, the 1st about grade score and the 2nd about assistance, but I'm not in buried condition or break a promise because the writer know and trush if Allah S.W.T knows what better for us.
The golden experience that I got from the failure experience is I'm do the teaching in front of other assistances for 15 minutes that unable thinking for before using english language without indonesian language. This is a hard chalenge for I actually,but I mush practice to can be or accepted in laboratourium language institute as one of the assistance. I think if 15 minutes is the long time for a practice that doing in front of other assistance with a teaching technique, but all the chalenges have finished. And when the that day is came the writer have felt an sensation of pounding. I ran goes to F buildings for saw the announcement on the labouratourium’s wall, but the good destiny is not with Me. That genesis maybe so far away from happy word, but I have gives the result to Allah S.W.T.
Good or not the result I can accepted with humble because I trush if Allah S.W.T, knows and always gives what the better to Prophed Muhammad followers. And I said alhamdulillah to Allah S.W.T because ever doing teaching practice infront of other people for 15 minutes. I was third semesters, and trush if one day what’s the amazing day can we got from Allah S.W.T.

TOPIC SENTENCE
            An Unforgettable experience in my live is about teaching practice for a competition or when the writer be the candidate for to be a  laboratourium language institute assistances on Muhammadiyah University of Metro on february 2th, 2014. 
AND HOW CALL TOPIC SENTENCE

Because mention and explain  about the topix or a complication which happend into the text.

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